Briony and More

Initially, I understand the common hatred of Briony in Atonement and why she is such a problematic character. Her actions were loathsome but in my opinion there are much bigger issues within Atonement. My major issue with this book as a whole is the stupidity of all adults present at Briony’s claim. It doesn’t matter to me if it’s the most confident thirteen year old I’ve heard in my life, the adults should’ve known better. The police should’ve known better. Arresting a man on the claims of a child is outrageous. An egregious letter from Robbie to another woman is hardly evidence that he would rape a child. For the police to conclude that Robbie should be arrested based on the claims of a thirteen-year-old and a vulgar letter he sent to a grown woman is nonsensical. Obviously class plays a major role, and to accuse a lower-class man is practically to make him guilty, which falls in line with the postmodernism theme that there is no absolute truth and truth is relative. Nevertheless, a child should not have this power. So while this is Briony’s fault, I blame the system of the time being unfair to lower class people and primarily the stupidity of the police and adults involved. They had every chance to act reasonably and didn’t. In terms of the “villain/s” of this book I give Paul and Lola that label. Lola because she had an oppurtnity to do right, and conciouslty made consistent choices against it. I understand that many would argue that Lola gave herself the best life possible, but at what cost. At the cost of her life, her morality, her moral dignity? I realize that if Lola had called out Paul it would’ve likely ruined her life. That is why, knowing justice wouldn’t be served t0o Paul, she should’ve at least said that it wasn’t Robbie. Saying that it wasn’t Robbie doesn’t require her to blame Paul. All Lola had to say was “No it wasn’t Robbie, the figure wasn’t his height”, or “didn’t look his age”, or “wasn’t his size”, or even “I didn’t see Robbie and I don’t think it was him”. Practically anything could’ve been said to keep Robbie from harm without directly blaming Paul. And even after this Lola marries Paul, in spite of his atrocious acts, brining into question Lola’s judgement from the beginning. For Paul, no evidence beyond Paul’s disgusting crime is needed to label him as such. While many people made crucial mistakes along the course for retribution for this sin, he’s the one who committed it. The avalanche that is this book is also a result of Paul’s sin. This instance and many lead me to the claim that man is inherently evil at his core, as Thomas Hobbes and Hsun Tzu claimed. I believe that man must follow God and without him he is lost and sinful and will act evil as are the “default settings”. By ourselves we act out of wickedness. After all what man has not lied? Who has not committed wrongs? Who effortlessly puts good at the forefront of his mind, without building the habit of brushing evil thoughts aside. I think this also partially plays into Briony’s sin. I think its multifaceted nature leaves her child innocence partially to blame but also her desire to blame Robbie for the letter, as well as the hatred built from her rejection. Briony’s loneliness and lack of support also plays a role. She has built an attention seeking life and mindset resulting majorly from an absence of present family. She has lost herself in her imagination because reality has left her to do so and Briony is adventurous at least in thought. This all has played a role in Briony’s horrid action that ruined Robbie’s life. Regardless, and I know this may come as a  shock to many. I don’t think Briony shouldn’t have tried to make atonement. This is for a few of reasons. The starting reason is that I am a realist, and while this may sound harsh, but why waste time focusing on what you can’t do, when you an focus on the things you can. Briony could’ve followed her passions and lived a fulfilling life and potentially changed the world. She gave her life atoning, and while the way she did it was admirable but it wasn’t for the right reason. Nothing should ever be done if it’s not for the right reason. Atonement wasn’t possible and would never be, the attempt is meaningless. The attempt only has value if there is even the slightest of possibilities it could have an affect. If my friend is at gun point, I might be several feet away, and leap towards the attacker knowing I won’t stop them. But the sliver of a chance that the distraction will, or something else I could cause makes it valuable. The past is the past and it is unchangeable, the more we try to forget it the more we remember, we can only wait until it fades away piece by piece. Briony’s attempt to make a remedy is her real sin. It sounds bizarre, but Briony’s actions ruined not only ruined another life, but also hers. It didn’t have to do so. I know from personal experience that a tragic event like that changes you, and I’m sure even more so if you are at fault, but that’s no reason to tear apart your life. You go through a period of deep grief, remorse, etc., and you move on. You will always live with that remorse, and at times struggle with it, but if you let it stop you then you have lost. I do wonder if in some way Briony could’ve actually helped Robbie, in some reality where she went and somehow sacrificed herself to clear his name or somehow gained him a new life. Nevertheless I blame this catastrophe of a book on the adults involved in Briony’s accusation, the villains are Lola and Paul, and Briony shouldn’t have bothered a doomed attempt to atone, when more could’ve been done with her life.

One thought on “Briony and More”

  1. My goodness, there’s so much here!

    You noticed the improbability of Robbie’s guilt actually being prosecuted. We are expected to suspend our disbelief at this point because we want to see the arrogance of the depraved upper class, which is itself is morally bankrupt, evidenced by the shambles of the two marriages, and the pedophilia of Marshall. So we accept this class based verdict, since we have been prepared for it in the foregoing narrative. In real life the truth would have come out…and nothing would have been done about it. But as you point out, the treachery allows for more treachery, which of course makes for good novels.

    Yes, man is inherently evil, and there is no shortage of it here, but I disagree with you that there is no point in the attempt of making an impossible atonement. This is, as Faulkner said, what makes the human creature noble in its savagery. We muck everything up and we try to fix it, failing again but trying nevertheless. When Briony remarks “the attempt was all” she is also living in the domain of the novelist, who tries to show “the better angels of our nature” (Lincoln) despite the fact that “the devils are all here” (Milton).

    Excellent post. 😊

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